I received my results for my two assignments today and they are grades apart. Am pretty amazed that an essay which I spent a month doing got me an acceptable grade while the essay I took only 2 days to complete got me an almost very good grade (Could have gotten very good if I did not extend the deadline by a day)...
Comments:
(1) The biggest shortcoming of your assignment is that you did not answer the assignment question. Your essay is simply an appraisal of the session. Fairly soon into things you lose sight of the relational concept under investigation. In these terms you could not engage matters at any level of depth (how do I answer a one-line question with not much illustration using 2500 words and at least 10 references?)
(2) Well done Jasmine, a solid essay, made richer by good use of examples.
Why is it that the affirmation are always shorter than the criticism. Don't they know that it takes 5 encouragement to diffuse one criticism. haha.
Keep going!
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I volunteer to help vette your essays in future if you are game! :) But my caveat is the same as when we took HY1101 - you cannot call me 'smart aleck' when i critique it! :p
- Robert
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